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deathless-the visitor in Ooo pt 2

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pt 2 of this chapter

Finn- ice king if hust her or anything , i swear. i kill ..
Ice king- shut up foolish kid.
Marceline - i don´t know what you are but i will save my friend of you . sick monster . get off him now !!
Ice king- you really want your friend back .he make was really strong . but stupid to fight me ..if you want your friend back , you ´ll fight me.
Marceline - .... i´ll , and vanish you for ever.
Finn- MARCELINE !! DON´T DO THAT PLEASE !!!
Marceline -it´s okay finn
she look it in his eyes and blinks. even though she would not return of that fight ..

Ice King- all right . let´s go and show your power to me ..
he open a portal to another dimension .
Ice KING - go Marceline, it´s late to back

Marceline look to that portal and look to Finn.
Finn- please , don´t go ... i know if you go . you will not return.. please . stay here .
he is crying e very sad with this.
Marceline - i ´ll be back Finn. just trust in me ...-- she kiss his forehead.Finn hugs Marceline . and belives what she says...
Finn - please be safe . don´t die . i love you Marceline..
Marceline - i love you too Finn, bye

She goes into the portal. when she enters, the portal close..
in there Marceline sees a wonderful place.. was made of clouds and sky
Ice King - in this place . i kill your friend. and next you ´ll be you .if you fight me . of course you ´ll die. thus fight me never survive ..
Marceline . i won´t fight .
Ice King - hahhahah . another stupid thing . thinks that you can beat me wihout fighting.. .... just to be clear . you ´ll not fight . but i will.
Marceline - fine . camon bring it..

in that moment she remember what Simon says to her .
she dodges his attacks and wait a moment to react..
when she got a oportunity , she start to speak...

Marceline - Simon - if you in here, please listen to me !! remember what you´ve done when i crying in that city ? in that moment i lost my mother and was scared of to be alone, Simon . you ust remember of this.
Ice king- what are you doing.?pretty useless . camon last chance to fight with me . you really can beat me . in show your feelings to me ?
Marceline - remember in that cave . i was hungry , and you Simon say you make the impossible to find some things to me . you fight against the mosnter and protect me from the wild world .. please go home Simon !!!!!!
Ice king- what ... are doing ??? you repulsive demon !!i will kill in the .. same way of you friend Simon.

seeing that , Marceline can defeat the crown and bring Simon back yo his body ..when suddenly she got a hit of him . a seriuos hit into the eyes. she fall off . faint in the
floor.
Ice king . you almost beat me . how spectacular, i ´ll gave you a second chance .
he bring her to the original dimension. he throw marceline in front of Finn
Ice king - she was pretty strong . just a hit in the eyes . she lost her sight now and forever .
Finn put his hand in her face and cry of rage .. he run to the Ice king -
Ice king - fuck off boy ! go heal your friend . and get out of here .
Finn- i swear. for my life i will kill you ..
he turned and grabs marceline in his back and go .
Finn cry the all way to home . in the home finn look to her face ., every time he sees the scars in her face he started to cry . ..

end of this part
pt3 in two days . the next will be awesome . and pretty emocional too .
Many thanks to this people NaomiiYumii. CrimsonFace. Mizz-chama. MissJuly1830 .Membrillita.
. sorry for the image. i can´t find a better picture
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The feels.... No....